Love your rhyme pattern Michael!

You have written about a place I ventured to several years back...To write of such darkness is hard to do and yet needs to be realease...Truly admire this peice!

I really enjoy your writing!!

Michael,

This is excellent! Not only is your rhyming impeccably smooth, but the content is full of so much emotion that weaves in and out perfectly through your words and imagery that the reader can connect instantly and feel these emotions as well. The trials of hitting rock bottom can be dark and discouraging, but towards the end of the poem you show that desire and determination to get through this rough patch and become that clearer image of hope and strength you long to see.

A wonderfully brave and emotional write that I read through several times and can relate to.

Amazing job!

Nominated :)

This is awesome, your meter and word choice are spot on and it flows like water on glass.

Epic.

Ben

Thanks again for your comments Ben