Comments : 'Morning Lonesome'

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Fluent rhyming and great expression of emotions!

    "'Seek the path to
    love,
    forgive yourself
    and,
    then share your
    love
    with someone else'

    This case will stay open
    until I,
    fulfil my quest.
    I swear on my oath
    I will do my
    best."
    ^^
    Love this!

    An excellent write, Michael, well done :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Love this especially the ending, life and love can feel like a real huge quest can't it

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Lovely piece full of hope and strength. Great write!