Wow, fascinating write. So many questions, are you still alive, dead, inbetween? Totally enjoyed this-

Ah, this is a very interesting and dark piece!
I love how you start with "Time of Death?" It definitely sets the mood for your poem and grips the reader right away.
And then ending the poem with "Patient."...which has a double meaning here, is excellent!
Great layout and a great write...and like Brenda says, leaves it open to several questions and interpretations.
Well done!