If I read this right then I truly believe that those who choose to leave would never have found solace in todays sunlight. I suffer severely with depression and some days are okay and I am filled with so much energy, other days I reward myself for getting out of bed and doing something even if its making a cup of coffee then sitting on the sofa lol (you have inspired me to write something) I guess no two people with depression are the same as they have their own woes and foes.

A great poem with quite alot of food for thought.
Take care, Em

I thought that your imagery here was first class, there's a really great flow when reading this feeling completely unforced and natural to read if that makes sense.

Epic

Ben

Liked reading this write. Imagery was good and the few words said a lot.

A wonderfully delicate piece of writing that deserves the front page, in my opinion.
All the best,

Ben

So sad but beautifully written. I wish so many people we have lost had somehow found the strength to deal with the night to be able to see that glorious sunrise once again.

Depression is terrible desease. You describe the way we, the ones who suffer with them and can't do anything, feel.
Beautifully written, dear girl.

Love, always xxx Ingrid

I'm so glad this is on the front page such an epic write.

Ben

This is gorgeous in its simplicity. Simple and powerful.

Court

Beautiful!
Congrats on the win!

Such a heartbreaking write, nicely penned.
PPx

Ohhh this poem sank my heart, such beauty mixed with tears....Ugh...Very pretty

So beautiful. If the sylable count were different they could almost be considered a series of haikus.

You must be painter ( so many poets are) to draw this colourful picture with words.

The night always resembles the struggles of life and the morning gives another hope. This is so greatly pictured here. This is so beautifully penned, Poetess. Congrats on the win.

Judging comment:

Not only has this piece captivated a large portion of PnQ this week, but it has also made it's mark on the hearts and minds of many. With imagery so clear that there is no mistake in the scene, and a tone of voice that is both gentle and startling, Poetess has reminded those around her that depression, dark times, and really any other difficult day are just minor experiences they do not hold us back from our potential and they do not taint the beauty of the world around. For such a brief write, this is stunning. So phenomenal that not being recognized this week would be a tragedy.