I liked this poem which reflects the 'not so nice' aspects of our society very well. Good imagery in every word with great descriptive lines within it. 'She sees broken glass, I see the process of staining'
Wish I had written that! Nice work Twistedmind.

Hey, this was really good, I liked the imagery and the rhyming throughout.

1/ I like this opening as it sets the scene nicely of this woman trying as hard as she can to keep herself out of trouble and stop herself being hurt (I think) but being completely draw to it too.

2/ I'm not entirely certain of the first line but it is what it is.. This woman has obviously been hurt in some way to have to mask her pain with painting on the most used mask; a smile and telling herself everything's okay.

3/ I feel none of us like how we love in fact most of us will despise the way we look or some part of it at least though why I'm not sure and the imperfections we have will look completely different to everyone else, some will (like us) hate them but there will always be one person who falls in love with them.

4/ Beautiful stanza.. We will all find this person we love no natter how they look because I think beauty is on the inside not outside.

5/ I loved this!!! No words could explain why!!

Em