Comments : Broken Heart

  • 8 years ago

    by Therapoetic4

    Enjoyed this one as well. Just a quick note... Did you intend "pigment" in line 7? Or figment?

    • 8 years ago

      by Karan

      Oopss typo! yes I ment to say figment in that line. Thanks for spotting it much appreciated.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Very well penned!