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by Ben Pickard
A nice use of language and some good rhyming in what is a very dark write indeed.
Well written, all the best,
Thanks Ben! ^_^
So very relateable
I liked this a lot. It's dark and as Em says, very relatable. Really good use of rhyming and flows well.
Thank you! I'm not convinced it flows very well yet, might try and edit it later on if I have any ideas.