Comments : Dreams (Acrostic)

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, I absolutely loved this and I have wrecked my brains trying to think of something other than 'wow' to say so here is me saying wow and more lol.. Your words are so refreshing and so lovely to read that in all seriousness I could read them all day. This in my opinion was much better read aloud (for some reason I tried my hand at a terrible Scottish accent lol.) I must admit I had to look up disparate as I thought you'd spelt desperate wrong for a minute lol but then it told me that I was wrong, again and here (from what I read) I think it means abit like indifferent visions festering in your mind, projecting these beautiful fictional images which has been brought on by sleep or may be lack of it and because it's a 'dream' there's no dramatic ending nor an important beginning just something in the middle that means more than it should to us? And it makes you question is this real life (memories) or is it infact a dream when you awake. And I think there's always this is it, was it question we ask. Maybe even what if.

    Fantastic write and you said you're still learning, this beats anything I have read recently hands down oh apart from your a trip down chemical lane because that was epic.
    Em

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Oh Em, what a lovely write in your comments. And yes who really know where and why dreams..... Bless you and thank you

      Michael :) x

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Abstract cine-film, without finale or prelude

    ^^

    I love this line, Michael. It conjures some great images of old cine-films my father used to take of us as kids and it describes that mystery of dreams and how they play out brilliantly.

    Well done on this - I will nominate it tomorrow when my votes are recharged.

    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Ben

    And I'm pleased it resonates, which I sense happy memories in the reader, being yourself :)

    Plus a nomination...Thank you

    Michael

  • 2 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Another mouth gaping piece.
    Lovely and original

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for you lovely comments on both poems. It really does mean so much

      Michael

  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    Like Em said, I want to say more than just wow...but...words have failed me at the moment...so...

    WOW. Just...wow!

    Awesome awesome awesome job, Michael!

    • 2 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I will echo what Ren said. WOW!

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey Ren, wows and awesomes! Wonderful words used in your comments, which are so meaningful and inspiring. Thank you so much.

    Michael :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Super cool acrostic! Loved the visuals-well done-

  • 2 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the tempo of this piece and how it doesn't feel like an acrostic at all. But ultimately, my favorite thing about this piece is definitely your sense of voice. Nicely penned!

  • 2 years ago

    by anand singh

    Another beautifully penned piece. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.