Comments : You have a choice

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    my kindness does not make me weak.

    ^^

    Dagmar, great to see you back posting and I have to say, this line is spot on.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Dagmar, how wonderful to see a poem from you! I have missed your writings. I liked this a lot. It's a personal write, you don't mince words and that has always been a trademark of yours. I know there is always things that have happened in our lives that we continue to beat ourselves up over, past regrets will either bury us or strengthen us. You are a survivor Dagmar, no matter what has been thrown at you. Well done-hugs!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is such an honest and raw write, and really puts life and all its challenges and changes into perspective.

    "I have a choice.
    Will I let this defeat me or for once
    enjoy what is most precious and that is life."

    These last few lines are extremely powerful!

    Well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Thank you all so kindly for your comments

  • 6 years ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    This fight! This fight this poem describes. I love the way you've put this together - amazing X

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is a raw and honest piece! I love the defiance you have, the fighting spirit! Beautifully done with a lovely message.