Love it but you need to add the final "t" IE: Heart not Hear

Oh what a fantabulous piece with a sort of tender mysterious and lovely feel to it. Beautiful job!!!! I love it!

Hi Lyrical

Simply wonderful :)

Michael

Thank you Michael x

This is just beautiful, just flows and enfolds you in your words-lovely!

Thank you Brenda :) xx

Judging comment

A captivating poem, the more times I read it, the more I'm drawn to it. I like how it's written in the third person as we look down on this magical, ethereal creature. Skilfully constructed and chocked full of imagery, we are transported to a magical world. Yet we are brought back to earth with the line "music and cigarette smoke entwine which for me adds depth and soul. Great poem