Comments : The losing hand

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This poem is full of nostalgia and genuine emotion. A great write and one that I would nominate but I'm out of votes at the moment.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Ben. Appreciated.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I totally agree with Ben. So much nostalgia, friends we drink with, friends we leave behind, friends we have lost.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Excellent write- and I really like those last two lines! Well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Such a poetical vision. This verse is poetry from within.

    " Everything was but a reason to see the world
    as if for the first time.
    Time has no measures, but the limits of a clock hand. "

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    Fantastic work fella