by C Dodrill
| Ha ha very cute. Had a bad "sun bite" my self recently. Gave ya a 5 | 
by stephanie
| lol that was cute,loved it!! | 
by cara
| hehe kute!! i loved it...5 :) | 
by aRii
| That was a great poem!! dont you just hate it when the sun bites? heehee ne ways keep the writing up! |