A beautiful yearning from this poem springs :)
PPx

You tricked me. I was reading and about to hit the back button when you caught me in your web. See I'm very particular. I absolutely love rhymes. The symetry, tempo, the way it feels rolling off the tongue...

The structure of this threw me off but it works. The natural pauses ate the breaks and the start of the new lines.

The message I got from this was sad, but sweet. I loved it.
~Alec