Kareen,

This is a particularly sad piece of writing - the flip side of the joys love can bring, I suppose. However, it's written well with some strong rhyming throughout.

All the best,

Ben

This is one heck of a piece here. I feel the heartbreak in each line, and I feel the emotions in every stanza. I swear I'll nominate it next time.
This deserves to have some attention.
Amazing job.