Dark and 'real' write Poetess.
A sad reflection of today's society and its ills.
PPx

Some wonderful imagery throughout this rather dark poem. Clever stuff.

All the very best,

Ben

There are the the rang of emotions this piece provokes in readers but the paradise in the end put everything in perspective.
wonderful work!

Love love love this!!

Oh my goodness - a really powerful piece. The beginning drew me in instantly and it was a painful read but so well done x