Comments : Midnight at the Oasis

  • 6 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Dark and 'real' write Poetess.
    A sad reflection of today's society and its ills.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some wonderful imagery throughout this rather dark poem. Clever stuff.

    All the very best,


  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    There are the the rang of emotions this piece provokes in readers but the paradise in the end put everything in perspective.
    wonderful work!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Love love love this!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Oh my goodness - a really powerful piece. The beginning drew me in instantly and it was a painful read but so well done x