Very interesting

Excellent poem Darklight. Nicely penned.
I like your exploration of time being man's servant.
PPx

Good stuff, Shanky. Well written and well rhymed throughout with some interesting thoughts. I suppose time, ultimately, is the bane of all our lives whether we want it to speed up or slow down.

Take care,

Ben

Thought-provoking piece. I've never actually thought of time so...profoundly before. Thank you for sharing this!

This is a heartfelt, well crafted piece. Reading through it though you would never get any clue the tormentor isn't man and actually is the time. It leaves you with the feeling that the poet decided to add a final twist in the end to make it mind boggling and even more interesting.
well done my friend.