Comments : To the Man from Pakistan

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben

    This is a very open and heartfelt write, one i think that many can relate to, I really like your word choice here and the structure with the triolets are a really nice touch!

    Great job

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thanks a lot for the comment Ben! I really appreciate it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Hi mossgirl

    Great piece of writing with much emotion

    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi, Michael. Thank you! :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    What we can let go, we deserve. The less travelled path, holds value. Until offence, trust no preference.

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Wow, just how sweet is this comment. You are right about everything you said. 'What we can let go, we deserve.' If we can let go of that thing, it means we are not selfish enough so yes we deserve that.