Comments : findyou

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As short as this is, I liked it a lot. The idea that we only find things when we stop looking struck me when I read this. We often see what we want to when we close our eyes...things aren't always as easy when we open them and actually look.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by gopi nath

      thank u for liking my poem

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Liked this short piece a lot.

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    I like this gopi. I also relate to this in my writing. And even in our sleep there too can be visions of loved ones or not loved one's.

    Well done
    Michael :)

    • 2 years ago

      by gopi nath

      you welcome that is true:-)

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    The sentiment in this piece is lovely .. we always find things when we aren't looking, lost purses, lost courage and even love.

    Well done, Em

  • 2 years ago

    by Lvi

    Our minds always reach where they want to be.
    Well done!