Well hello stranger, hope you're ok.

1/ Well opening up your heart like this from a memory unleashed can some times be good other times well mainly bad because in my opinion it opens a whole can of nasties. I love the word usage here.

2/ I like the empathsis on you and mars here because to me the you is a distant memory and mars is linked there by being distant too.. my interpretation anyway but yes we can all grow love when we want to.

3/ I love the imagery here of your heart writing our Mon amoures (love that too)

4/ love the way their smiles seen as sexually arousing, maybe I read more into that than I should have.

Oooosh that ending? (I have to say I googled this) and its French do goodbye, yes I know I'm terrible at languages lol.

Nice to see you back,
Em

Hi. Nice to meet you. Em said most of what I wanted to say. The whole poem has this aura of love mixed with goodbye. Bittersweet. Great write.

Blast those dastardly women, Moe. They do seem to say that word with an unnerving regularity, don't they?

Great write. All the very best,

Ben