Wow, I'm speechless. Very very sweet.

Michael for some reason I feel this is a little different to your usual type of writing but maybe love has just taken over the town crier, or you've had a spell cast upon you by the wicked sorcerer lol joking aside this is still beautifully written with fantastic rhyming and fantastic imagery.

Title - is rather intriguing and makes you wonder what way are you traveling are you walking, using public transport or thee old broomstick (lol)

1/ Wow then here we have it your riding on your wonderful shooting Star and I feel this is because you so deeply in love that you feel on to of the world which is pretty beautiful.

2/ I love this because to me it says this relationship (like every other) has its ups and downs.
I'll rest my travels, when I reach 
your heart, and hope that we we'll
never part

"...and then our sacred sphere,"
This is sublime, just yours and your lovers space, woohoo.

3/ Absolutely loved this ending as to me it says right to hell with everything we will make this work and if people try and get it our way then we will only get stronger.

Fantabulous.

Em

Edit: if this is based on literal events then I am truly happy for you :)

Michael, this is indeed lovely. When we reach that destination with that special person nothing else matters. You really showed that with this write-just lovely.

Absolutely stunning, Michael! I agree with what everyone has said. What a lovely piece! :)