by mossgirl19
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A short piece that made me smile. Love the moon. Nice one. |
by gopi nath
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Thank yu for liking it |
by Em
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I think this is really sweet but just a suggestion as you used light twice for the rhyme I feel it's a little forced.. how about for the second line "it filled my heart with much delight" |
by gopi nath
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Wow that 'll be nice |
by Sai
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The last line was quite sweet. |