Comments : To Write a Poem in Seconds

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Something doesn't sound quite right, but not sure what it is.

    Good rhyming though

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is just fantastic

  • 8 years ago

    by gopi nath

    nice one

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The ending really is effective here. A firm slap in the face that I wasn't expecting at all.

    Great write,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Liz

    Definitely not expecting the ending. Lovely write <3