Hey gopi

I really feel sadness and pain in this piece, and I sense that you word your poetry to your best ability, and with your passion of expression.

Just keep going fella. I feel a great poet in you.
I hope you understand :)

Michael

Hi, Gopi. Great to see that you are writing longer pieces. Michael is right, you are a great poet and it just shows. I appreciate that you take suggestions into your heart and you welcome them. It shows that you are humble enough to grow. Keep writing!