Comments : The Untitled Poem

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss M lots going on here, from a readers perspective. Really interesting piece which I have enjoyed reading

    well done

    Michael :))

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Dear Lady!! This is FANTASTIC! So many emotions and thoughts and full of raw passionate musings. LOVE IT! Well done! Much love to you! <3

  • 6 years ago

    by Sai

    Life is always confusing, and there are moments in our life when we acknowledge this. We wonder about our purpose, why we're (still) here. I think the title is very fitting.

    Fifth stanza: Faking a smile actually is effective in bringing up our mood. Our brain is not capable of interpreting and so the upward muscle movement of our lips confuses the brain and it releases oxytocin anyway. This poem got me thinking a lot.