Comments : The Sweet Escape

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel, this is genuinely excellent and incorporates some wonderful half-rhymes throughout which, in my opinion, are the secret to great rhyming poetry as they help stop the piece sounding forced.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nice Miss M

    Big gamble with love :)

    Micheal

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write, Dear Lady!