Comments : Rubbish

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so intense, Michael. I love where all the ; are placed, they created really effective pauses in this piece.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M for your lovely comments :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I have no words other than Omfg!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Em... expressional words as always, thank you :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    I'm with Em on this, except I'll add one more word to that. WOW!!

    (<3)^Click!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Same applies to you Miss Ren.
      Thank you, it means a lot :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Phil

    Holy smokes!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Holy smokes says it all Phil

      Thank you fella :0

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wow (ok, so I'm borrowing from other comments, lol). This really is a powerful raw write- I loved your layout and the pauses added to the entire tone. Well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Again Miss Brenda, for your words...Thank you

      :)x