great musical piece :)
Loved it , Mel xx

A stunning write, Mel.
All the best as ever

Wow!! I absolutely agree, this is a stunning write Lady!! Amazing!! <3

Superbly done

I loved the story of this. There was a beauty to it, a strength, a sense of sadness throughout. I rarely say this, but I wish they'd been more...which probably means it was the perfect length.

Perfect flow once again.
And as Brad already mentioned length is perfect too.
The beauty of such poems is that you begin to imagine everything. Like it's real. It's happening infront of you.