Comments : The Journey of Time

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi Brad, wow, I love this poem. You have managed your rhyming very well here and it flowed really well. It has not only a beautiful, but an important message and I think we need to be reminded of the importance of time every now and then. Wonderfully written. :-)


  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fluently written with a message I appreciate.

    All the best

    • 2 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you, Ben. I appreciate you having taken the time to read this poem.