..well two friends that had very difficult times in marriage and love. Met each other on a 'Blind date' four years ago, and they seem very in love and both getting married again :)
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Michael, I have been away for a week, only to return to you writing flawless sonnets. You have it with this one, good fellow. The meter, syllables, rhyme, everything - spot on. It's poetry like this that keeps me coming back to the site.
All the very best as ever,
A very strong piece of writing. Every line was important and giving new information, and not simply regurgitating a previous line in a different way to make a rhyme work. I also enjoyed your use of the English language, too: simple but varied.
Thank you sweetheart :)
Love you lots as always xxxx
2 years ago
Michael , I think in the 5th line it is sacred instead of scared, please correct it if I am right.
This is the thing with love. I mean it happens to you and you find that one person in the billions made only for you.
I think you got lucky to have her in your life as your wife. As in love this happens very rarely that the person you love, loves you back.