Comments : Sins of the Father

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hey I think someone is so right back on track. This gave me the creeps and took some time to shake it off. The visuals are spot on so I can see the father and son right before my eyes. Your rhyming is great as ever and I feel your strength in writing dark pieces.

    • 4 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you. Yes, I've been re-bitten by the poem bug ever since I began reading the sonnets of the magnificent William Shakespeare.

      And yes, I feel my strength is in dark, sad, painful pieces. Tis very interesting. Not sure if I should worry about that or not