I did really like this. Particularly the first two lines: what a great opener. The second stanaza was a delightfully witty. The title, too is clever. In fact, I must echo a previous comment and say it was all cleverly designed.
As I've said before, I believe this style to be an absolute strength to you.
2 years ago
Mel I so so loved this one.
I would not say it is relatable but it is simply beautiful. I feel like every word just fits correctly and it was so delicate to read. I also liked the way you combined letters and numbers - genius :)