Whahaha, funnt poem!! =D I Loved it.. But gays are cute (and sweet..) So nothing against them okay?! =P Ghehe, I really think they're cute anyway.. And most of them are even goodlooking.. Ohw well, I'll stop talking about gays.. =) Ey, keep writing!! Take care and Enjoy Your day!! Ciao xoxo

*funny

:) hehe, thanks Jennifer and Billie for leaving comments, I really appriciate them. As for the gay issue... I have nothing against them as long as they don't hit on me :D

Awwwww..... thats chooo chweet! I too have a similar poem.. i will find it and post it soon. YEah and Bille is right most of the gays are good looking!!! How sad :( joking.. That was sucha sweet poem. Keep writting.

maybe so but so do straight guys! great poem! really good!

hahaha i loved it

haha....i liked this one....it made me laugh...pretty hard lol...it took me completely by surprise!

loved this poem! it fits with brandon's. "perfect me"... that was perfect! take care:)

aahahahah XDDD lol :*) beautiful :*)
-Mortalidaga

rotflmao! that was some piece o' poetry!! very nice it really cracked me up! were u the class clown in skool by any chance? jst wondering! it was really funni i liked it alot. thanx 4 commentinmg on my poems

xxoo,
alysse

wow! very funny, that was the funniest poem ive ever read in paq. you rock my sox. lol. i had a lot of fun reading it!

lol allen! i just red ur leatest poem nd compared it to ths and the difference is unbeliable. the talent and style are still there but you can see how much ur talent has grown!! awesome, im so proud of yah!!

lol i loved it the other one was great too thaough so brendon im giving you props as well as allen

lol nice man it goes with mine prettty good =) keep up the work man *duece

lol- this is brilliant. both yours and brandons is. i love the honesty of it and the bit about when you cook every flees- genius. take care. xmollyxx

Arrr :) Great thanks to all who have read and commented :) Your words mean alot to me :) arrrr... my first first poem :) So I have to say a special thanks to Brandon, your "perfect man" triggered my randomness and got me hooked on to poetry :) you rock dude... of cause, the rest of you guys rock too!!!! :)

hahah this one is funny, great job

LOL
cool poem!

This is such a cute poem made me laugh thanks