Acrostics are never easy when done well and, personally, I have always found them difficult when trying to incorporate rhyme. As sad as this is, it's well done indeed.
All the best, Phil,
Ben

You just nailed it, Phil. Loved it.

Hey fella

I love acrostics, and your piece is extremely wonderful, full of emotions of sadness

Nice one!

Michael :)

Phil, well done acrostic. Nice to see something on the boards from you. I feel you put sadness in perspective.