Comments : Pure

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Beautiful!

    I can feel the beauty of your heart and soul in the 2nd and 3rd stanza.

    Nothing in this world cant be compared to mother's love for their childrens.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Lucifer ... it's a powerful force for sure :-)
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Touching and sweet!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    If my heart lived on the outside
    It would be clear for all to see
    Your name is engraved all over it
    The very essence of me

    ^^

    All the stanzas are wonderful, butI did love this one. I suppose this could be about a dog or a cat for instance, but being a parent myself, something tells me it's about your child/children! :).

    Well done - this is simply lovely.

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Ben! Yes it's about my son :-) Glad you enjoyed it ;-)
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful kitty. It took me back to the days with mum.