Comments : Dinner Date

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Whoa! I won't pretend to fully understand this, but I read this as someone trying to lure someone out of sobriety for their own gains.
    It's a really powerful read, I could visualise the scene perfectly. So well written, love it.
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Courtney Hough

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! "He" is actually depression. And "He" is tempting me to self harm/ kill myself. Thanks again!

      -court

  • 6 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow this is so powerful, I have a feeling the "he" is alcohol, tempting you? I can only speculate, but regardless if it is your vice tempting you or a man, it's so wonderfully written! This is going on my favorites.

    • 6 years ago

      by Courtney Hough

      Thanks so much for the read! "He" is actually depression. And "He" is tempting me to self harm/ kill myself. Thanks again for the read:)

      -Court

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Courtney, this is superb! The scene you paint and the clarity of the story you tell is wonderful, all set to effortless rhyme. I wish I could nominate, but it being in the explicit section prevents me, I'm afraid.

    Take care,
    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Courtney Hough

      Thanks so much for the read and review Ben! It means a lot:)
      -Court