Firstly, the theme was unique to me, very ironic actually that a lifeless thought would have an insight...hehe. I enjoyed reading thru its sentiments! Some deep writing here. :-)

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I really enjoyed reading your piece, especially the line 'in hope to never be swept into the drainage of brokenness' such a powerful line, meaning a bitter end (to me.)

Well done
Michael :)

A stormy sort of a write, Shanky, but one I enjoyed.

All the very best to you as ever,
Ben