Comments : Knives are not the only blades...

  • 6 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow this is beautiful, and I love the inspiration!

    -Mandy

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Mandy ... it reminded me of someone I once knew :-)
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is so very emotional and honest.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful song and well written piece of inspiration Miss Kitty K
    Fabulous
    Much love
    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Very well-written, Kitty!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, that song is amazing - makes me go cold whenever I hear it. Secondly, I love your use of metaphor throughout this piece; excellent work indeed.
    I have to say, for someone who doesn't write much free verse, you do so with imagination and an entirely palpable air of scathing menace in this. I can quite literally feel the disharmony and contempt seething through the page as I read.

    Well done, Kitty,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Ben :-) I keep meaning to try more free verse, but the rhyming stuff flows far easier ... I must apply myself! lol x
      =^.^=