Comments : The Picturesque Family

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Gwenyth, this is heart wrenching and so well written. To continue with your excellent use of metaphor ... I can feel your pain of being one of the casualties of this war ... really well rhymed too. Well done! x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Gwenyth Hill

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment!

  • 6 years ago

    by lori

    This is beautiful and explains the hope that someone in every family feels if their family is going through something. Good job...I myself relate to it so thank you for sharing