Comments : Losing Them

  • 4 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Sad theme, but the way you wrote, it sounds beautiful.
    Full 10 for the rhythm, emotions, structure everything.

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, Gwen. This one's rhyming is really seamless. I want to nominate this too but I have run out of nominations! Great work, I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A story well told within some very accomplished rhyming, which you clearly have a knack for.

    Take care,