Hello CJT
There is much of this that I like. I love the nature references; they show: strength, vulnerability, hope and more. I like the mystery of the journey and the descriptions of places, like the blue house.
I wonder if you separated the long trail of text into stanzas if it would make for easier reading? This aside, I like the varying line length which certainly highlights areas, like,

You, so dark and vast
Me a flowing spirit
Floating from the past

Little gems like this help to make this poem a little diamond.

Well done.

As ever there are some good descriptives and rhyming in this piece which makes for good reading especially when read aloud as it seems to flow off the tongue

Because its so pretty out here
A beautiful place its true
But theres one way to make it better
Thats only if you're here too

I admire the whole poem but this stanza I loved the most.