Comments : Opposite Roads

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some proficient use of language and excellent formatting brings this piece to life. Well done.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Completely agree with you sherry, your best.
    Use of language reminded me a bit of David's poetry style.
    But at the same time it's unique.
    I just hope someone nominates it.

    • 8 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Thanx...I just don't know what went over me when I wrote this poem. It's like from a pocketbook...lol... :)