Comments : United

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    I felt the love! Consider revising 'there you there' and some '.'
    lovely read!

    • 8 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Thank you for that.. I was exhausted when i wrote this but changes have been made. Thank you (:

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Cjt, it really gives the feeling of being one.