by Robert Long
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I really dont know what to say. Its a great poem with excellent story. Made me want to cry because ive been there way too many times. Good job and keep it up. Love it :) |
by Rey Severs
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Thank you so much, I wrote this when very upset so I am glad it reflects the nature of the mood. |
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*absurb = absurd |
by Rey Severs
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Thanks, didn't catch that one, d and b look similar (dyslexia).I also appreciate the feedback from one of my favorite writers! :) |
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Oh betrayal is so hard to forgive or repair. Your hurt is so well depicted here. A sad but great write! :-) |
by Rey Severs
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Thank you so very much! |