It really is just like a very unwelcome guest. Great write! Well done x
=^.^=

Dealing with depression is and can be painful and you have expressed it so well with this piece. Well done. All the very best

Oh darkness, had I wished you’d booked a return flight
Instead of crashing into my heart tonight

^^

Dark writing, but I do love this couplet.

Take care and all the best,

Ben

Risqué,

This piece has such a darkness, but a with all your writing you manage to say it with such calm, which allows the reader to digest the feeling of what you have written.
Another fine piece, albeit the turmoil of depression, which only too well resonates with myself.
Well done and
much love and warmth
Michael x :)

As I read this, I felt the pain described. This was quite riveting, if I say so myself. Nice work!
<3 Pebbles