Comments : Depression

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    It really is just like a very unwelcome guest. Great write! Well done x

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dealing with depression is and can be painful and you have expressed it so well with this piece. Well done. All the very best

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Oh darkness, had I wished you’d booked a return flight
    Instead of crashing into my heart tonight


    Dark writing, but I do love this couplet.

    Take care and all the best,


  • 6 years ago

    by Michael


    This piece has such a darkness, but a with all your writing you manage to say it with such calm, which allows the reader to digest the feeling of what you have written.
    Another fine piece, albeit the turmoil of depression, which only too well resonates with myself.
    Well done and
    much love and warmth
    Michael x :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Something Strange

    As I read this, I felt the pain described. This was quite riveting, if I say so myself. Nice work!
    <3 Pebbles