Comments : Fall

  • 1 year ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    I actually had a visual reading this. Which doesnt happen much. I love this! Great job.

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very nicely written. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello hope. Beautiful haiku. The first line is very nice. The beautiful visual is aided by the second line too. Although I feel something in the second line is hindering the flow. Not really sure if 'softly flutter' is okay. The third line is a nice crisp end. It left an impression, and for me a good haiku does. Well-written.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael


    A lovely short piece on nature
    Michael :)