I like how you played with the relation of notions and emotions.

CJT...a beautifully crafted work. I loved that the opening and ending stanzas are the same. For this piece I think it fitted well.

Here I may go again, hehe, but you know this is such a lovely poem... I think this stanza here is unnecessary:

Blood..
So dark but
So bold.
without you
I'm dead.

It kind of interfered with the gentle tone, blood being dark.

But nonetheless a great piece. :-)

A great title, given that the only distance between you is physical ... he's right there with you, in your heart - couldn't be closer. Great write! :-) x
=^.^=

CJT
Like the style and the flow of your poem, with a heart-felt message throughout
Well done.
Michael :)

Well formatted and a touching love poem.

Beautiful and touching.

Love it and I know so much how it feels keep up the good work thanks for sharing ur poem with us

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