Comments : intoxicated by midnight

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Pat...what a captivating come back poem. You usually write in this structure, which is longer than what I usually read from this site and yet your works always see to it I read it to the end. I like the inclusion of dining in the first stanza, and the piece started from that idea moving towards a deeper sentiment at the end. Ahuh-mazing. :-)

    Lest I forget, great title too!