Comments : 4 am

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I exactly have such time now at 4.25 am . I like how feeling roll on top of each other like wave s, in this piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is great and I can really relate!
    This line "And you touch every edge of your universe" is especially excellent!
    Good stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful Chaos...it is like you have frozen a moment in time with your words. Being awake by that hour with stillness all around you, you are left to think things over and yes, sometimes drown in them. I felt this as this moment of thinking is painful and beautiful alike. I like this as it left an impression in me. Great write.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful Chaos...it is like you have frozen a moment in time with your words. Being awake by that hour with stillness all around you, you are left to think things over and yes, sometimes drown in them. I felt this as this moment of thinking is painful and beautiful alike. I like this as it left an impression in me. Great write.