Comments : One last wish

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely and a perfect poem to read after just having read Kitty's new one.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is lovely :-) but your mum won't want you worrying about her. It's lovely how much you care x
    =^.^=

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Touching and beautiful, full of love.

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    extremely touching

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    A very beautiful piece Black Hole
    that flows with your emotions all though
    Well done
    Michael :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Amrita Singh

    This poem portraits how much you love your mom! That's incredible.. Your feelings are deeply expressed through this composition ! :)
    Beautifully written :)