Comments : This is us now

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    A very sad piece, reflecting your emotions while in mourning. So sorry to hear this. But wonderfully paced, and a nice flow all through

    Much warmth
    Michael :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    aw, heart-wrenching. I feel it here. I'm so sorry for your loss. No words of mine will help, but writing your thoughts in such a beautiful way will, I hope, bring you a little comfort xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great to see you posting again, albeit, with a rather sad piece of writing. My genuine sympathies to you.

    Take care,


    • 5 years ago

      by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

      Thank you, I was really in love and um I'll be writing again so don't worry you'll see more of my writings lol